Colin changed his attitude because when he realised that Luke had cancer Collin started to think more about Luke than him self,when he meets a young man called ted he
thinks that he has to work with what’s he got…
“All I’ve got is draggy shoes this Christmas”
Collin started the novel with a selfish attitude now he has changed into thinking about his brother.
March 18, 2013 at 7:41 pm
This is a great example of a well expressed paragraph response. You’re now ready to move on to more extended writing.
April 18, 2013 at 2:38 pm
You explained your writing clearly and you didn’t go off task in this essay.