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Colin changed his attitude because when he realised that Luke had cancer Collin started to think more about Luke than him self,when he meets a young man called ted he
thinks that he has to work with what’s he got…

“All I’ve got is draggy shoes this Christmas”

Collin started the novel with a selfish attitude now he has changed into thinking about his brother.


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2 responses to “Paragraphs”

  1. Christopher Waugh Avatar

    This is a great example of a well expressed paragraph response. You’re now ready to move on to more extended writing.

  2. Cadell Avatar
    Cadell

    You explained your writing clearly and you didn’t go off task in this essay.

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