Category: Dystopia
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Mr Waugh’s Feedback on your Dystopia
Strengths: This story clearly demonstrates that you have taken a lot of notice of the ways that dystopian authors create suspense by using sensory description and by keeping information from their reader. You have also worked very hard to respond to the advice you were given to make your tense (present) and viewpoint (first person)…
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Your Peers’ Feedback on your Dystopia