I swing Spider-Man
I crawl hug wall
I fight bug man
I jump hall slinger
I run wall crawl
I swing Spider-Man
I crawl hug wall
I fight bug man
I jump hall slinger
I run wall crawl
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July 8, 2013 at 10:37 am
This is a really good poem but it needs more detail and you could start to extend your poem you haven’t used use of the objective to ask a question
July 8, 2013 at 10:40 am
It’s only because its a poem not a presentation